[His first thought had been a rudeness, a diatribe fuelled by his annoyance. This world is hardly some fantastic heaven where he expected to be living. Back home, he had found some peace and lied down to rest. Now he is here.
It's disconcerting.]
If you are intending to walk where you are going, might I suggest you focus with your eyes?
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It's disconcerting.]
If you are intending to walk where you are going, might I suggest you focus with your eyes?
[Blunt. Direct. Rude? He's not trying to be.]